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New Air Nips

This poem was originally supposed to be a haiku. It wasn’t until I hit publish that I noticed the formatting had changed. Whoops!

Here is the haiku version:

Peeking from beneath
Protective wall of warmth, sun
Plays and new air nips

Which version do you like better?

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